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Originally Posted by Teli
Hi Lovely,
Looks as though the Income Genie blog has been deleted, so I could only take a look at the other blog.
The layout is easy, and I like how you integrated the advert above your first post. It's not intrusive, but the ads aren't very targeted. If it's a business/marketing blog, why am I seeing adverts for end tables and purses?
In the side column, you're promoting an affiliate product, but the graphic is poor quality. Check to see if there are any better graphics for that product, and replace it. Another thing that struck me was the lack of an "about you" section. It instantly made me think, "Who is this person and why should I trust the recommendations?"
Scrolling down the page, there's another banner in the side column that's being cut off. If the message is lost, why will someone click on it? I'd recommend finding a different graphic that fits or creating a new one that fits (it looks as though it's only text).
Good job for your first blogs though and good luck for the future.
~ Teli
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Hey I want to tell you thank you for looking at my blogs. The URL for income genie was changed to better fit what' on the blog. the url is
http://shopzones.blogspot.com
I will take a closer look at my blog and make the changes. I think I see everything you spotted. The reason I put the "shopping ads" there. I tried to think of my visitors of taking care of "their" needs, A little mixture. That's MY thinking. I'm new to it and just trying to come up with stuff for my visitors. I will put my "about ME" section back on it. Thanks for everything.