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Hi Lonnie,

Yep I totally agree. There are a number of grammatical and spelling errors on your homepage. Normally I tune off or leave a site all together when I notice a spelling mistake. I think it would be a great idea to get someone to proof read your site. But the content is good and I like the overall feel of the site.

Teli gave some amazing advice and you did well to ask for some feedback. I hope it works out, I will check in on your site from time to time to see how things are changing.