Hi K,
Good job on changing the page title.
No you need individual posts with CONTENT and keywords about each type of product.
post #1) Title: "Swimwear Sale at One Hanes Place! Save 25%!"
at least 2 paragraphs of text ABOUT Swimwear, different types - bikinis, one piece, sexy swimsuits, plus size swimsuits, ect. Get differnt related keywords in the text. Then also have some text about One Hanes Place and why they are a great place to find discounts on Swimwear with a text link to Save 25% plus the banner.
So that's ONE post filled with content for that one offer.
Then start post #2 (different timestamp, new title, page of content) for the next offer.
Look at it this way though - you are really doing a shot gun approach and it won't work well.
Example using your 1st offer. Search Googe for "Swimwear Sale at One Hanes Place"
Swimwear Sale at One Hanes Place - Google Search
There are 157,000 competing PAGES using those keywords. Yours, as is, may come up on page 132,000 if you are lucky. No one will ever even find it. The ones that come up high have LOTS of content related to the keyworks and are using lots of other techniques.
If you search for your very generic page title keywords in Google "Shopping bargains and discount savings" there are over 1.3 MILLION competing pages.
You are trying compete with BizRate and Yahoo and big established coupon sites and sorry dear but you arent ready to play with the big boys. To try to shotgun sell all types of different products and compete with all those top sites you REALLY need to know what you are doing and you are there yet.
DON'T WANT TO rain on your parade, but sincerely trying to save you some time, money and heart-ache!
You need to pick a NICHE - one product category that's very targeted and not too competitive. Write in-depth indiv articles and learn the ropes. Study our newbie sticky threads and then go to the niche forum.
Hope this helps!