Hi Donny - i would suggest to break lose of the idea of putting down to much hype on your page. So don't look at what you see on richjerk.com which is a over hyped page as well.
Don't convey the message of selling a secret, but convey the message of selling a course that will help someone understand how to start making money online.
You will come across much more believable doing so.
Introduce yourself to the visitor but don't go to much onto detail on the home page, refer them to your "About" page to learn more about what you do and what allows yourself to make money online.
And create your own material, i take it this is all part of an affiliate program?
It can be much more rewarding as well doing so.
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