Please Review My Site

[randeg]

Hello everyone,
I am requesting for a a site review on this:

http://www.digitalcameracave.com

The review is requested so I will know what I am doing wrong. Any suggestions as to how I can improve my site will be greatly appreciated. I will appreciate suggestions as to how to increase my traffic and make money off the site.

Thanks in advance,

Randeg

[iReef]

Hi Randeg,

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is too long, doesn't tell the user anything new, and worst of all, pushes all of your products below the fold. You can pretty much count on people looking at your headline, the pictures, and the prices. And that's about it. If someone reads the copy, it will be because they're thinking about buying one of your products and NOW want to know more about you.

JMO, and meant only in the most constructive way,

iReef

[templates]

Yea,the post above is correct,BUT,bots LOVE text and the more text you have,the better SERPS your site will have as well.What does everyone think?

[iReef]

Originally Posted by templates

Yea,the post above is correct,BUT,bots LOVE text and the more text you have,the better SERPS your site will have as well.What does everyone think?

I would agree with that, but there's plenty of text below the products already. Maybe an H1,H2 and a 1-2 sentence paragraph of copy before the products would be best, but I still think as many products as possible should be above the fold.

[randeg]

Originally Posted by iReef

I would agree with that, but there's plenty of text below the products already. Maybe an H1,H2 and a 1-2 sentence paragraph of copy before the products would be best, but I still think as many products as possible should be above the fold.

Thank you iReef for your input. It is much appreciated.

Randeg

[mitchell_k21]

Originally Posted by randeg

Hello everyone,
I am requesting for a a site review on this:

http://www.digitalcameracave.com

The review is requested so I will know what I am doing wrong. Any suggestions as to how I can improve my site will be greatly appreciated. I will appreciate suggestions as to how to increase my traffic and make money off the site.

Thanks in advance,

Randeg

Very cool Stuffs..i like the design..can i get some Free Cam? hehe..

[randeg]

Originally Posted by mitchell_k21

Very cool Stuffs..i like the design..can i get some Free Cam? hehe..

Thank you for the kind words. I'd love to give you a camera; I will keep you in mind.

Randeg

[mitchell_k21]

hehe..thnanks...just kidding about the cam..

[Darthfather]

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