Just joined with new site; need review

[kbldshmn]

Hi all,

Googled around to reach this forum. Now it's in my fav bar. I'd like my site reviewed please. I'm primarily using CJ, AdSense, and Amazon for affiliate programs.

http://www.notreadyforhairloss.com

It's the first one that I built. I have a few more ideas.

Thanks ahead of time for all your inputs.

Renato

[Teli]

Hi Renato,
As a first attempt at a site, it's a good job on the design (it's easy on the eyes), but it lacks focus.

There's no clear navigation and the reader can easily get lost in the blocks of content freely floating on the page and there is no clear distinction between those blocks.

For any future designs, consider what you want people to do when they're at your site. If you want them to read product reviews, then highlight the product review content, or if you want them to click on your AdSense, then do some AdSense optimization.

I hope that gets some ideas stirring for you.

~ Teli

[kbldshmn]

Thanks for the reply. I needed your input to understand why I have very little conversion. Since the launch on 1/2/07, I made like $5.00 but I've gotten around 60 or so unique visitors per day.

I'll be coming up with a blog and opt-in e-mail list for the next round. I'll have to redo the first page to accommodate. I'm also scouring the net for a good online adsense site. Just can't seem to find anything other than blogs.

Renato