Blog review needed

[gley]

Please check my blog Work At Home Start Up Guide and review it. All your comments and suggestions are welcome and appreciated. Please take the time to read my posts and let me know what you think about them; tell me what you think about my writing style or abilities. Is the content helpful in providing information? What about the design? Is it easy to read? What would you like to see added? If you have any other suggestions let me know. Thanks for your help.

[Julia]

Hi Gley,

My main suggestion would be to add some personality! The layout is fine - easy to read and navigate, and the content is pretty straightforward albeit a bit basic.

What is lacking is visual content and personalization. There a tons of blogs out there, so you need to make yours stand out more.

[bfree74]

I agree, it is very bland. Try adding personality into the design as well as the writing.

[gley]

Thank you for your suggestions. I agree with you the information is basic but for many home business and small business starters is new.
Personality is key to a blog. I’ll do my best to reveal more in the coming postings.

Thank you all for your time.
Gley Yahya

[kuraykillua]

What's with the audio? It is really annoying.
-k