Please review my sites

[KirkhamsEbooks]

You can do the same thing with subindexes

http://foo/index.htm

http://foo/healthNfitness/index.htm

My main index page will never get good ranking as it's basically portal for my subindexes

But my martial arts subindex for example is quite high

Rick

[jazzguy]

Excellent point as well Rick...

Jazzguy

[marketingmama]

You've already gotten some great advice but if you don't mind me adding my 2 cents...

I think that your earn money online site needs a lot more white space. You need short little paragraphs instead of long blocks of text. It's too daunting when you go to read it.

[hifromeddie]

Thanks for the advice. I will try splitting up the paragraphs into smaller portions.