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Old 02-26-2008, 02:14 PM
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Old 02-27-2008, 02:04 AM
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Hi there
Just some constructive criticism:

1. Your header needs improvement. The white gap doesn't do anything, try and make the header more engaging.
2. The site seems very fragmented. White space is good but try and compact the site a little more.
3. Your zip code area should probably be moved up a bit, in place of the lips image.
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Old 03-01-2008, 06:48 PM
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Hi-
I have to agree with the first reply. And hopefully add a few more helpful suggestions.

The header is over powering, I think it needs to be smaller.

Also the text kind of runs together, for me its seems like a lot of work to read.
I would use more headlines and highlight/bold important parts so that a person who skims (like me) can quickly scan down the page and get the basics.

I would also add a couple more images down the page.

Hope this helps.
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